Hello hungry mountain. Would you have more of me today?
You send your purple mist to pull me like a hand, cloying and tugging at my concentration.
Yes mountain, you have my eyes again.
That line, it's too neat, too hard, too like a marker traced across a screen.
And blue for the sky. How obvious.
And look, a perfectly choreographed V of geese, balancing the weight of the cloud.
That dark cloud though, I didn't expect that, it's a nice touch. Holding over all, for the time being.
There is irony there.
Now a new line is forming in the mist. Sirrus blows in from the West, wrong in the picture.
The mist is rising, your line fades. The cloud is a blue milky screen and the mountain is gone.
My gaze is lost.
Perhaps I will visit the woods today.
Sausalito, San Francisco
Oh wow...i really like how you use the words there...it's very nice. I'm going to keep on reading your work! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Endou, I'm putting something new up tonight, hope you like it.
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